和考官一起，解析雅思G类写作4分到8分不同分数段的评分要求和范文 | 雅思考试经验分享

对于需要备考雅思G类的考生来说，雅思写作部分是我们中国考生没容易拿分的部分，因为写作和口语都是属于“输出型”的部分。因此了解并掌握雅思G类（培训类）写作的不同分数段特点对于我们的雅思总体提分至关重要，它不仅能帮助大家在备考时更有针对性地提升，并且还能对我们移民后的在国外日常英语书信和报告撰写能力有所帮助。因此在今天的文章中，神通出国英语将以一个典型书信题目为例，深入分析从雅思4分至8分作文的差异，助你理解雅思评分标准，加快雅思写作提分速度。

标准透析雅思考试最重要的参考资料是剑桥官方真题集，任何一本真题集的第七页都是针对各个分数段进行了详细阐述。针对中国考生密集分布的5、6、7、8分，以及基础的4分，我们将进行深入剖析。

雅思4分，初阶语言尝试者：这一水平标志着考生刚触摸到目标语言——英语的门槛，表达能力有限，经常仅能片段式地传达基本信息。文章中错误频现，尽管如此，关键信息尚可辨识，确保基本沟通意图得以维持。语法结构极为基础，主要依赖简单句，复杂构造的缺失不影响其达到最低限度的交流目的。

雅思5分，基础语言运用者：迈进这一层次，考生开始部分掌握英语的驾驭，尽管表达中不乏瑕疵，多数时候能确保核心意义的清晰转达。错误在所难免，但需控制在不妨碍整体理解的范围内。语法展示上，若能全程依靠简单句而确保信息的完整性与连贯性，则可符合5分的标准。

雅思6分，合格语言运用者：此阶段标志着考生已整体把握英语，尽管不完美，偶有不准确或费解之处。语言运用的复杂度提升，要求在文章中灵活穿插简单句、并列句及复合句，体现句式多样性，否则难称“合格”。这意味着语法结构需体现出一定的成熟度和灵活性。

雅思7分，优秀语言运用者：达到这一高度，考生不仅要求信息传达准确无误，还需在表达上精雕细琢，选用最为贴切的词汇与句式，展现出一定的语言魅力。文章中错误稀少，且需展现出对复杂语言结构的熟练掌握。尤为重要的是，论证须详实有据，逻辑严密，即便考官对观点持保留意见，也会认可论述过程的合理性与说服力。这表明，7分考生在语言运用上已步入了更高的艺术境界，能够以更加精致和高效的方式进行沟通与论证。

雅思8分及以上，卓越语言运用者：踏入这一顶尖区间，考生已成为英语运用的大师。8分标志着考生能以精准且富有表现力的方式表达复杂思想，语言流利自然，几乎不露痕迹。文章不仅在内容上丰富深刻，形式上也展现了极高的多样性与灵活性，包括对高级词汇的自如运用及复杂语法结构的精确操控。虽然偶尔有小错，但它们既不频繁也不影响整体的精彩呈现。

接下来我们一道雅思例题来生动解释上述的理论：

向朋友解释搬家理由的题目

Hello Dave,

I move house. Now house bigger. Kids grow, baby come, old house small. Look for new, find one, move in.

New house got 3 rooms, nice bath, kitchen new too. Kids happy, playroom big, garden there. Michel happy, not much paint work.

Come visit weekend, see house. We want see you. Weather good, BBQ garden.

New address, phone below. Call, say when come.

Bye,

Frank

Dear Dave,

I am writing to tell you we've moved houses. Our family needed more space with the kids getting bigger and the newborn, so we decided to shift. After some searching, we found a new place and we're all settled in now.

The new house has three bedrooms and both the bathroom and kitchen are quite modern. There's plenty of room for the children to play in the spacious living room and the garden outside, which they love. Michel's also pleased since there isn't much decoration work to be done.

Would you be able to drop by this weekend? We'd love to have you over, and if the weather permits, a barbecue in the garden sounds great.

I'll include our new address and phone number below. Do give us a ring and let us know your plans.

Best,

Frank

Dear Dave,

Hope this letter finds you well. I wanted to share the news that we've finally moved into a larger house. With the twins growing and the new addition to our family, our previous bungalow simply wasn't cutting it anymore. Hence, after a bit of searching, we've transitioned into a more accommodating abode.

Our new residence boasts three bedrooms and features a contemporary bathroom and kitchen, quite an upgrade from before. The extra space, particularly the expansive living room and the garden, has brought joy to the kids. Even Michel is content as the house requires minimal redecoration efforts.

It would be fantastic if you could visit us this weekend and see our new home for yourself. We would really enjoy your company, and if the weather cooperates, a garden barbecue would be an excellent way to catch up.

I'll provide our new contact details below. Please do call ahead to confirm your visit.

Warm regards,

Frank

Dear Dave,

Greetings from our new home! I'm penning this to inform you about our recent relocation. With our twins rapidly growing and the newest family member’s arrival, our former dwelling felt cramped, necessitating the search for a more spacious environment. We're delighted to announce that we've successfully settled into a more generous abode.

Our current house offers three commodious bedrooms, complemented by a sleekly designed bathroom and a state-of-the-art kitchen. The enhanced living area and the lush outdoor garden have significantly increased the children's play area, filling them with delight. Moreover, Michel is thrilled as the house's condition minimizes the need for extensive redecorating tasks.

We'd be thrilled if you could grace us with your presence this upcoming weekend and offer your thoughts on our new domicile. A reunion, potentially accompanied by a delightful barbecue amidst our garden (weather permitting), would be most welcome.

Please find our updated address and contact number at the end of this letter. Do give us a bell and confirm your availability.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Frank

Dear Dave, 

I am writing to let you know that at last we have moved to a bigger house! We just couldn’t go on living in the two-bedroom bungalow now that the twins are growing up and the new baby has arrived. So we started looking — and one thing led to another and finally here we are in our new home. 

I’m sure you’ll like it. We have three bedrooms now, and a very modern bathroom and kitchen. The kids are happy because there is much more space with the big living room and the garden outside. But Michel is the happiest of all because he doesn’t need to do much decorating. 

Why don’t you come around/round this weekend and see what you think of our new place? We would all love to see you and if the weather is good, we can have a barbecue in the garden. 

Our new address and phone number are below, so give us a call and let us know when to expect you. 

Lots of love, 

Frank

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